O' melody queen
Keep on whirring
And denting
Signature of a new day with your beak
On murky glass of my window.
O' melody queen
Remain my alarm clock forever
And wake me up every morning
With your mellifluous tunes.
O' melody queen
Be my fortuneteller for lifetime
And bring me luck each day
With your lyrical expressions.
(1/18/2009)
Pure enchantment, Sameer. Your metaphors are very original. I like what you see from your window on the world.10 for you. Warmest regards, Sandra
Very well put together, filled with the hope andanticipation of the challenges of a new day 10
poetry has been transcripted n translated from your genes and is being expressed in your heart
'O' melody queen Be my fortuneteller for lifetime And bring me luck each day With your lyrical expressions.' It is also a melodious poem. I love the above lines most,10+++
'o' melody queen - love this- we need her to wake up too and to walk at our side, you have a natural talent...well done
i am confusing whether to praise or not............ it is so beautiful that i have no words ++++++++++10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The tittle should have better been, 'O' Melody Queen'; all the same, thank you for sharing it with us. Edward Kofi Louis.