Sameer Ahmed

Rookie (08/17/1986 / Pakistan)

My Destiny Song - Poem by Sameer Ahmed

O' melody queen
Keep on whirring
And denting
Signature of a new day with your beak
On murky glass of my window.

O' melody queen
Remain my alarm clock forever
And wake me up every morning
With your mellifluous tunes.

O' melody queen
Be my fortuneteller for lifetime
And bring me luck each day
With your lyrical expressions.




(1/18/2009)


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  • (6/8/2009 2:48:00 AM)

    Another amazing poem..10! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/8/2009 2:46:00 AM)

    Another amazing poem..10! (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (5/31/2009 10:01:00 PM)

    'O' melody queen
    Be my fortuneteller for lifetime
    And bring me luck each day
    With your lyrical expressions.'

    It is also a melodious poem.
    I love the above lines most,10+++
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  • Cindy Kreiner Sera (4/25/2009 9:51:00 AM)

    'o' melody queen - love this- we need her to wake up too and to walk at our side, you have a natural talent...well done (Report)Reply

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  • (1/31/2009 12:22:00 PM)

    i am confusing whether to praise or not............ it is so beautiful that i have no words ++++++++++10 (Report)Reply

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  • (1/29/2009 4:37:00 PM)

    Destiny is sometime what we choose to do, and sometimes destiny is what we were meant to do. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/29/2009 11:04:00 AM)

    destiny is what we choose to do with all the random things in life...

    Best wishes,
    Sabrina.
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  • (1/28/2009 12:06:00 AM)

    predestination is the word. nice (Report)Reply

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  • (1/27/2009 10:45:00 AM)

    It sounds like you must have faith (Report)Reply

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  • Indira Renganathan (1/27/2009 9:27:00 AM)

    Destiny to foretell all good things to you..nice write (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2009 11:39:00 PM)

    nice one, Sameer: thanks (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 12:12:00 PM)

    poetry has been transcripted n translated from your genes and is being expressed in your heart (Report)Reply

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  • (1/21/2009 3:18:00 PM)

    Very well put together, filled with the hope andanticipation of the challenges of a new day 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (1/21/2009 6:08:00 AM)

    Pure enchantment, Sameer. Your metaphors are very original. I like what you see from your window on the world.10 for you.

    Warmest regards,

    Sandra
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/21/2009 5:36:00 AM)

    The tittle should have better been, 'O' Melody Queen'; all the same, thank you for sharing it with us.

    Edward Kofi Louis.
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  • (1/21/2009 2:33:00 AM)

    You have done well to express yourself in this and all that you desire of the world and life to be attained. Did find a couple of things though, hope you don't mind:
    You have the word, whiring... what do you mean? Is it meant to be whirring as in buzzing or humming?
    In the last verse you have 'Be my fortuneteller for lifetime' suggest...for a lifetime
    Also your first verse seems a bit disjointed through the second and third lines thus not tying everything together clearly. Is there something missing in this verse to express itself like the rest?
    Overall though, I enjoyed the read and the imagery and message that came forth. Well done. Many blessings to you
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  • (1/20/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    Once again you delivered a thought provoking poem. Good work! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/20/2009 10:31:00 PM)

    Amazing :) Just like a Fairy Tale. The best yet that I read from your writtings (Report)Reply

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  • Ershad Mazumder (1/20/2009 9:37:00 PM)

    Let God bless you with His divine light and melody. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/20/2009 9:05:00 PM)

    I do believe that alarm clock can be unneccessary if you have faith and religion
    trusting god and angels will get you up safely back to earth
    believing in what god wants for you
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 18, 2009


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