Sameer Ahmed

Rookie (08/17/1986 / Pakistan)

Moon In The Window - Poem by Sameer Ahmed

Stars faded
And hegemony celebrated
By white light
On darkened land
As a milky globule
With greyish spots
Imprinted its clone
On window glass.

Hypnotic scene
Cooled the ambience
And beamed diversely
To light up
My inner vibe
Tides of calmness rose
As I heeded.



(6/24/2009)


Comments about Moon In The Window by Sameer Ahmed

  • (7/28/2009 5:41:00 PM)

    'white light on darkened land' indeed the moon is a vision of comfort on a lonely dark night... and thanks to the heavens we are never really left in total darkness.... (Report)Reply

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  • (7/6/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    beautiful through out..but beauty initself looses its charm so the last line delivers the impact....and it becomes majestic... (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Martyres (7/6/2009 6:12:00 AM)

    You have eulogised the peace and stillness of the night in this lovely poem...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (7/6/2009 4:58:00 AM)

    written very nice
    regards
    sandhya
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  • (7/4/2009 4:19:00 PM)

    You capture the stillness and peace of the night and form into art..10 (Report)Reply

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  • (7/4/2009 11:06:00 AM)

    this is a kind of poem that gives the needed tranquility to the reader friend.. very soothing poem.. a great refreshment..thanks10+=
    with love
    shan
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  • (7/4/2009 4:26:00 AM)

    The peace, the calm of night, entranced by moonbeams.....lovely poem. 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (7/3/2009 6:24:00 PM)

    I particularly like these two lines:

    Imprinted its clone
    On window glass.

    Good use of modern going ons.
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  • (7/3/2009 2:38:00 PM)

    Your poem creates a certain dreamy and elusive atmosphere that is associated for me with art works by impressionists. It has a quality to seduce a reader with colour and escape at the same time somewhere into darkness(or whiteness depending on a state of mind of a reader) .If to recite it, it also brings an interesting sonic experience reminding of 'sound waves' in 'Claire de Lune' by Claude Debussy. Thanks for sharing, Sameer :)
    A.
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  • (7/2/2009 10:20:00 PM)

    Glorious poem Sameer. Beautiful imagery and I too feet the peace that other poets talk of too!
    10 Karin Anderson
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  • Cindy Kreiner Sera (7/2/2009 11:24:00 AM)

    Superb Sameer, I have a calmness coming over me too from that moon in the window- lovely imagery (Report)Reply

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  • (6/30/2009 4:19:00 PM)

    Sublime poem! I love it! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/30/2009 6:28:00 AM)

    wow! a calm beauty of the past entangle in your poetic words of immortality
    a beautiful piece of all time.... a 10 +++++
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  • (6/30/2009 1:37:00 AM)

    very peaceful i like it,10 (Report)Reply

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  • (6/30/2009 12:12:00 AM)

    tides of calmness rose as i heeded- lovely, this is what happens when we tune to nature. very beautifully expressed


    love'
    Mamta
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  • (6/29/2009 9:08:00 PM)

    The moon painted its imagery on the windows
    of your soul. Peace that passes all understanding...
    lovely...

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (6/28/2009 8:06:00 PM)

    A very nice way of passing unto another person the feeling of calmness amidst a stressful day. So simple yet a moving poem. Way to go! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/28/2009 7:36:00 AM)

    Fine picturesque of the moon in the window...........10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • Fay Slimm (6/25/2009 4:17:00 PM)

    This has a lovely warm feel - - it is a well thought out verse with considerable imagery....10 from Fay (Report)Reply

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  • (6/25/2009 2:46:00 PM)

    powerful words great poem 10 (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 17, 2009


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