Moon In The Window Poem by Sameer Ahmed

Moon In The Window

Rating: 4.6


Stars faded
And hegemony celebrated
By white light
On darkened land
As a milky globule
With greyish spots
Imprinted its clone
On window glass.

Hypnotic scene
Cooled the ambience
And beamed diversely
To light up
My inner vibe
Tides of calmness rose
As I heeded.



(6/24/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 30 June 2009

tides of calmness rose as i heeded- lovely, this is what happens when we tune to nature. very beautifully expressed love' Mamta

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comatose 30 June 2009

very peaceful i like it,10

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Antonio Liao 30 June 2009

wow! a calm beauty of the past entangle in your poetic words of immortality a beautiful piece of all time.... a 10 +++++

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Karla Bardanza 30 June 2009

Sublime poem! I love it!

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 02 July 2009

Superb Sameer, I have a calmness coming over me too from that moon in the window- lovely imagery

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Sonya Florentino 28 July 2009

'white light on darkened land' indeed the moon is a vision of comfort on a lonely dark night... and thanks to the heavens we are never really left in total darkness....

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Aamnah Akhtar 06 July 2009

beautiful through out..but beauty initself looses its charm so the last line delivers the impact....and it becomes majestic...

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Sandra Martyres 06 July 2009

You have eulogised the peace and stillness of the night in this lovely poem...10

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Sandhya S N 06 July 2009

written very nice regards sandhya

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 July 2009

You capture the stillness and peace of the night and form into art..10

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