TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .


My Dress For Tonight, , , - Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

wait my poem and my dress above that tower
you can guess what it will be and what it's color..
this is not the poem.. that is a first step toward the tower
wait my coming poem.................


Comments about My Dress For Tonight, , , by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

  • (3/19/2010 2:53:00 AM)


    The tower I know liked plain dark colours like what Anne Boleyn wore, you will have to surprise us or was Snow White in a tower.....no that was the wicked witch! in anticipation,
    regards
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  • (10/23/2009 11:38:00 AM)


    I am willing to wait and be surprised when you pick your words for a night out in the tower. (Report) Reply

  • (10/9/2009 12:49:00 PM)


    Anticlimax wow! Great work to keep readers waiting.
    Ten this and in advance for next LOL
    Ms. Nivedita
    Cordially invite to read and comment on my poem: Why Hack My She or other poems.
    niv
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  • (8/28/2009 1:57:00 PM)


    Readers always wait for the next…
    Nice concept.
    Ten.
    dr. sakti
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  • (8/19/2009 4:05:00 AM)


    and after that..please dropp by...il do the laundry :) (Report) Reply

  • James Mclain Is It Poetry (7/8/2009 5:50:00 AM)


    TaMaRa, all await eagerly each treat your dress unfolds in words of grace..
    May the wind driven sand wash your feet and hands soft laid in rest...iip
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  • (7/5/2009 5:55:00 PM)


    THE DRESS YOUVE GOT IS A PERFECT 10..PLEASE BE SO KIND AS TO REVEISIT MY POEMS N IF YOU GOT TIME, WROTE 2 NEW 1S....BE A MAN, AND DEEPEST DEPRESSION...WOULD REALLY ENJOY YOUR COMMENTS, AND VOTES (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2009 12:24:00 AM)


    a sweet piece of work and appreciate your first step towards the tower..must be the tower of success and climb on it to see down..how the world look like.. its impressive idea and liked it very much... well done friend..10++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/21/2009 1:24:00 PM)


    Very lovely and charming write. (Report) Reply

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (6/18/2009 4:02:00 PM)


    wow! a real beautification!
    10+
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  • Saadat Tahir (6/6/2009 10:24:00 AM)


    sounds like a victorian era fantasy....
    with lorn bravados wait...under the tower....while the princess incarcerated above cant decide what to wear
    very nice
    ten an cheers
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (5/18/2009 4:58:00 PM)


    oh poem is just art of love
    and color seems to be paints of art, wonderful romance drifting alone from tower above, the luscious glow by dress seduces the reader, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing
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  • (5/18/2009 9:31:00 AM)


    waiting for the poems wearing a dazzling cloth........... (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (5/16/2009 4:56:00 AM)


    'wait my poem and my dress above that tower
    you can guess what it will be and what it's color..'

    Dress and poem both are beautiful. One is material and the other is immaterial.
    This poem does sense an aesthetic balance in both.
    Best Wishes
    Naseer
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  • (5/15/2009 11:32:00 AM)


    hey i love this
    wait my coming poem
    -10 anjali
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  • (5/13/2009 1:29:00 AM)


    wow tamara, ,
    another amazing thoughts..
    sure i can guess, , but will not going to tell you, ,
    thanks for sharing tamara..

    hazem al..
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  • Aziz Alkaabi (5/11/2009 11:33:00 PM)


    You have some enchanting meter, Tamara.
    I just adore the word 'color' here.
    And I commend you for your hope and zeal and wish you all the best with your coming poem.
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  • Akram Saqib (5/11/2009 6:39:00 AM)


    A GOOD POEM IS THE MOST BEATIFUL DRESS FOR A POET. (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2009 7:21:00 PM)


    yes respected madam we wait.........beautiful write........... (Report) Reply

  • (5/10/2009 2:37:00 AM)


    you are a fairytale come true..beautiful write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 5, 2009



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