My First Cell Phone Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

My First Cell Phone

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My first cellular phone was a brick.
It was heavy and clumsy and thick.
If I used it today
you would certainly say
'Get a load of that guy --- he's a hick! '

My First Cell Phone
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 26 January 2023

Excellent!

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Kim Barney 27 January 2023

Thank you, David, for taking the time to comment.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 January 2023

lol Kim put a smile on my face Today

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Kim Barney 27 January 2023

Dear LeeAnn, whenever I can make you smile, it has been worth my while!

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Ohoi! Great, ! This poem is ranked #87 in the list of Best Member Poems today. Congratulations, Kim.

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3. Nice memories. Fantastic Limerick. Enjoyed the humour. Thank you, Kim

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2. I didn't own a cell phone until almost everyone else around me got one. I didn't feel the necessity. …3

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I do remember brick sized cell phones, being used by many of my friends, clients and acquaintances. I never owned one. I am a brick-and-mortar guy (pun intended) . (Contd)

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Susan Williams 29 January 2023

a day without reading a Kim Barney poem is a day without a smile, a twit from a wit, and a kindly view of human foibles---thank you for posting your poetry, my friend, you do us a service

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Kim Barney 29 January 2023

Susan, you do ME a service with your generous, kind comments. Thank you so much!

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