Sure, it was love at first sight!
I knew, her very sight ignited a spark
Burning my dark interiors
Like charcoal on fire
And sweeping me head over heels
I wanted to get rid of that burn
In tongueless eloquence
With the language of my eyes
I dropped my secret whim
In the alluvial delta of her heart
To nibble its way up
With its roots running deep
And waited for her response!
The desire to earth the emotion onto the page and deliver the message of love universally powerful and here a deftly penned account, I can relate.
First stanza creates beautiful imagery of experiencing love at first sight.. Nice poem indeed. Happy writing.
What a lovely first love letter from him to her, with the language of the eyes! - I loved the lines I dropped my secret whim / In the alluvial delta of her heart! So, so beautiful, Valsa!
Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.
Oh Valsa-ji, what a poem this is! Alluvial delta! You speak with words that don't speak but speak all the way. Glorious. If you permit me - may I leave a tenner here, although it won't add to your already gained glory. Thanks for inviting me to this beautiful gem of a poem.
Oh this is so beautifully composed with so loving words......Valsa.......one of the best love poems ever composed and I happened to read it ever.........10/10
First Crush, as far as I understood this is a description of first born daughter, i can imagine how she responded your love letter and how she has been responding it now. A lovely poem.
Excellent....that letter must be filled with beautiful selected letters_Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The desire to earth the emotion onto the page and deliver the message of love universally powerful and here a deftly penned account, I can relate.