Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 292 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

My Ghost - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

Take a stand and let me know
Which direction we shall go,
A nearer time than today
Shall not again come our way...

Hearts be true, yet, hands be still,
Paralyzed, they wait until
The moments have all but passed,
Few in reach are left to grasp...

Like a ghost crept out at night
Moaning still his weary plight
Haunts the chambers where he lived
The life he spent unfulfilled...

The vapors of something lost
Into composition tossed,
Makes this unnatural ghost,
A most disconsolate host...

I fear that's what's left of me,
An unrepairable deficiency,
Truth cannot be falsified,
Somewhere-it appears,
In full bloom and more sincere...


©All Rights Reserved-2012


Comments about My Ghost by Romeo Della Valle

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (6/30/2012 10:20:00 PM)


    all of us have ghosts in life
    and you speak for us
    like you,
    we also fear the same thing
    wow.
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • (6/3/2012 8:16:00 PM)


    nice poem u have so many. u are a very talented writer (Report) Reply

  • (5/22/2012 4:50:00 PM)


    A very nice softening poem..puts me into a lull as I read..
    beautifull.
    (Report) Reply

  • Arild Ertsland (5/19/2012 5:33:00 AM)


    Very nice work here my friend :) You write with your heart and soul, and yes we need to grasp the opportunities while they`re there.Excellent work! Take Care, Arild (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (5/18/2012 4:42:00 PM)


    Great poem expressing the need to grasp opportunities in life before its too late. (Report) Reply

  • Sossi Khachadourian (5/18/2012 2:50:00 PM)


    Although its so sad but its not bad at all very well written and emotinal, i like the way you write my friend the real poet have to be at first honest and you are, Good job keep the good work up: -) ~ Blessings~ (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (5/18/2012 11:52:00 AM)


    Wonderful poem, but the depth of it is so sad, Like a ghost crept out at night, , heartfelt work here, so well done.
    Such a touching read.
    (Report) Reply

  • Miss Darkness (5/18/2012 10:47:00 AM)


    nice poem :) nice work (Report) Reply

Read all 8 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Friday, May 18, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012


[Report Error]