Aqua Flower


My Heart Needs Somewhere To Belong - Poem by Aqua Flower

My heart wanders around
searching for love that is not found
only a true heart will find what it needs
but a life that is wrong cannot receive
and the air that I breathe
has a stench
My thirst for true love
will never be quenched
if I don't make myself whole
my soul to the devil will be sold
My heart needs to make right the wrong
my heart needs somewhere to belong

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Topic(s) of this poem: heart, heart song, longing


Comments about My Heart Needs Somewhere To Belong by Aqua Flower

  • The Muse (11/12/2019 1:23:00 AM)

    That is an amazing poem full of hope (Report)Reply

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  • (11/11/2019 10:51:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem exploring methods to be adopted in quest of true love. Congrats on POD. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/11/2019 10:15:00 PM)

    Those who live for love
    And want to give it,
    Are happier and
    Better people,
    Not just crows
    Waiting to do harm
    From yonder steeple.

    A very beautiful and intense poem, sincere, that fully reaches the heart.
    Congratulation on its well deserved selection as poem of the day.
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  • Aqua Flower (11/11/2019 10:06:00 PM)

    Hello my friends and thank you. I just noticed that my poem easvchosen today. I did not know. I know it's kind of shocking that I didn't know I must have missed the email notifying me. I knew because a friend inbox me to congratulate me and so here I am looking at all these wonderful comments tonight.. It is because of all of you that I continue to be inspired. (Report)Reply

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  • Jez Brul (11/11/2019 8:38:00 PM)

    A soulful write..A great poem of the day..Congrats dear poet.10=++ (Report)Reply

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  • Bernard Snyder (11/11/2019 7:21:00 PM)

    Wow. What an amazing poem, Aqua! Also, a jazzy name to boot. Congrats on one of the best poems I've read. This one should be " Poem of The Year! I am rating it a 10*! (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn Paul (11/11/2019 7:04:00 PM)

    Love for oneself, love for life and love for one another is all we need.
    May your heart be enriched with love.
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  • Kostas Lagos (11/11/2019 4:41:00 PM)

    Way to go Aqua! Wonderful poem (Report)Reply

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  • (11/11/2019 6:56:00 AM)

    Like the song all we need is love, love is all we need? Yet so true. (Report)Reply

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  • (11/11/2019 6:41:00 AM)

    Congratulations on this very heartfelt poem being selected as Member Poem Of The Day. (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (11/11/2019 6:30:00 AM)

    I had visited this poem earlier and found it lovely,
    very happy now that it has been selected as POD.
    congrats
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/11/2019 6:14:00 AM)

    Visiting this poem for the second time. A very emotional write. Hope you get true love soon. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (11/11/2019 6:11:00 AM)

    3) CONGRATULATIONS for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, dear Aqua.
    Such greatest insight and so much beauty, most deserving poem. I will read this time and again, sure.
    Love is indeed most important and precious in a human life. A 10 and myriad of 10's for this more than most beautiful poem, Super amazingly written. The title is sublimest chosen, it will grip every reader. To MyPoemList
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    Sylvia Frances Chan(11/11/2019 10:48:00 AM)

    WOW! Twice chosen, dear Aqua, truly most deserving, same date last year. Double Congrats!

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (11/11/2019 5:55:00 AM)

    2) .............then.......My thirst for true love
    will never be quenched,
    if I don't make myself whole.......................absolutely true.
    When I saw this adorable poem at first sight, my heart leaps up, undescribable! Such a most beautiful utterance,
    so poetic and yet so humble. The most fascinating poem I read this morn, so much truth and yet so adorable
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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (11/11/2019 5:47:00 AM)

    I cite you here, dear Aqua Flower:
    My heart needs to make right the wrong
    my heart needs somewhere to belong.................you said it very right, a heart that is still feeling wrong, cannot get something right where it wishes to belong, because it still has the face of wrong, once that face has the face of right, then everywhere it can belong to.
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  • (11/11/2019 4:31:00 AM)

    Congrats for being chosen POD.... a very nice write. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/11/2019 4:25:00 AM)

    Congrats! any poem on love by anyone is amazing but this one is more than amazing! (Report)Reply

    Sylvia Frances Chan(11/11/2019 5:39:00 AM)

    This one is extra-ordinary, that you must know, dear Akhtar Sir, you as an experienced poet.
    I THOUGHT that you will make it a reality on what you think. Is this adorable poem, this unique poem only " more than amazing? " . I doubt that. Thank you so much that I may point this.

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (11/11/2019 1:05:00 AM)

    my heart needs
    somewhere someone
    to belong...//
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  • (11/11/2019 12:42:00 AM)

    A brilliant lyrical write.

    Congratulations on your poem.
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  • Mahtab Bangalee (6/23/2019 10:46:00 PM)

    My thirst for true love
    will never be quenched
    if I don't make myself whole......./// it's excellent poetic loving expression; love it
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    Aqua Flower(6/24/2019 10:38:00 PM)

    What a lovely reply and thank you! Every heart needs a home.

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 23, 2018

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 23, 2018


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