My Helen Poem by Jahan Zeb

My Helen

Rating: 5.0


In a garden green we sat
My hand in yours
Yours held I
Roses around
Stars in the sky
Moon in full bloom
And the gentle breeze
Hither and thither
Move the blades of grass
The fire-flies flew
Around me and you
In restless heart of mine
The passion slowly grew
Closer I got
Pressed hand tight
No more in the world
Nor the nature's sight
The numberless glowworms
Around you revolved
In beauty and the charm
Resting on my arm
A newly wedded groom
Envious the moon
Jealousy in stars,
For resting on my arm
Was Helen of the Troy

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is dedicated to Saeed Jan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 15 November 2012

A very beautiful and fantastic poem. A great tribute.

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Hazel Durham 13 November 2012

Beautiful, so delicately written with lovely imagery. Inspired write! Thanks for sharing.

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The irony is the powerful co existence of a poetic mind that is never devoid of elusive romantic flutters. The notes on the dark and shady spaces have finally been replaced by this brilliant write one on a breathing sign.

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Vijay Sai R 12 November 2012

a fascinating piece of poetry

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Anita Sehgal 11 November 2012

very romantic.poem..! .

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2018

Beautiful romantic poem, a touching one.

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Chinedu Dike 12 January 2015

A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and subtly penned to capture the bliss of love mutually felt between a happy and loving couple. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Sahil Sood 17 November 2012

a very beautiful poem sir, luvd the way you xpressd emotions..

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Nabila ima 16 November 2012

Nice poem and you can express what you feel. I like it

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So Close 15 November 2012

yeah its good and fully packed with emotions good work... »so close«

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Jahan Zeb

Jahan Zeb

Malakand Pakistan
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