My Vanishing Beauty... Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

My Vanishing Beauty...



Yesterday midnight
amidst my dream
she arrived
entered into me
made me feel
her soft body lines,
hot breath,
the warmth of mouth,
her touch silky smooth
words song like sweet
all turned me ecstatic
gave a heavenly feel

And throughout the night
she lovingly stayed
inside my closed eyes
when the morn arrived,
on softly awakened,
I didn't open my eyes
lest she should leave my
sight body and mind

She- the vanishing beauty-
my Lady Poetry

18 06 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastine Humaemo 08 February 2009

line mixed with love, care, romance and innocense.......all under a roof........a dream which all longing fr.............10++ sebastine

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Miriam Maia Padua 15 January 2009

splendid piece...amazing with wonderful thoughts, wonderful words wonderful dreams of your love, excellent lines... ...........................all are found in this piece... ...and these lines.... And through out night she lovingly stayed inside my closed eyes; when the morn arrived softly awakened i didn’t open my eyes lest she should leave my sight body and mind….....SO SWEET AND ROMANTIC.....

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Yasser Koor 01 December 2008

your dreams are brilliant and pure and the is an angle in that dream and soooo beautiful. it is nice poem and the imagination is great: touch silky smooth, , warmth of mouth, , , pla pla pla, , nice poem, well done

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 October 2008

...a fine touchy poem. style of expression i liked......thanks

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Reshma Ramesh 02 October 2008

wow very nice indeed.....beautiful

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 15 September 2009

how beautiful...the relationship between that lady and you...she brings out the best in you.....10

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premji premji 01 August 2009

so you felt the feel how a poem works within the soul..........great...

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Sonya Florentino 18 June 2009

love your 'Lady Poetry' Kesav... have you read my poem 'A Gentleman Poet'.... i think you will see yourself in him....

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Carol Gall 28 May 2009

beautiful dreams excellent poem 10

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Bob Blackwell 09 May 2009

Kesav, you love writing poetry, you must have very sweet dreams as your poems like this one are beautiful. Warm Regards Bob

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