Yesterday midnight
amidst my dream
she arrived
entered into me
made me feel
her soft body lines,
hot breath,
the warmth of mouth,
her touch silky smooth
words song like sweet
all turned me ecstatic
gave a heavenly feel
And throughout the night
she lovingly stayed
inside my closed eyes
when the morn arrived,
on softly awakened,
I didn't open my eyes
lest she should leave my
sight body and mind
She- the vanishing beauty-
my Lady Poetry
18 06 08
splendid piece...amazing with wonderful thoughts, wonderful words wonderful dreams of your love, excellent lines... ...........................all are found in this piece... ...and these lines.... And through out night she lovingly stayed inside my closed eyes; when the morn arrived softly awakened i didn’t open my eyes lest she should leave my sight body and mind….....SO SWEET AND ROMANTIC.....
your dreams are brilliant and pure and the is an angle in that dream and soooo beautiful. it is nice poem and the imagination is great: touch silky smooth, , warmth of mouth, , , pla pla pla, , nice poem, well done
...a fine touchy poem. style of expression i liked......thanks
how beautiful...the relationship between that lady and you...she brings out the best in you.....10
so you felt the feel how a poem works within the soul..........great...
love your 'Lady Poetry' Kesav... have you read my poem 'A Gentleman Poet'.... i think you will see yourself in him....
Kesav, you love writing poetry, you must have very sweet dreams as your poems like this one are beautiful. Warm Regards Bob
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
line mixed with love, care, romance and innocense.......all under a roof........a dream which all longing fr.............10++ sebastine