Never Give Up Poem by louis rams

Never Give Up

Rating: 4.4


always be inspired to follow your dreams
never give up
for i know what it means.
never give up
is the name of the game
for if you give up on yourself
everyone will do the same.

keep your spirit alive by being yourself
for in your life, there is no one else.
when life seems to have turned its back
never give up
just pull in the slack.

take your dreams and throw them in the air
they'll be millions of others, who are willing to share.
they have their dreams the same as you
and to your heart, you must be true.

never give up
just look ahead
why do you fear
what do you dread?

life is full of surprises and you hold the key
to unlock the lock that will set you free.

never give up
and you will see, that your dreams
become your reality.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a very encouraging write..it will pull up any one..thank you for this one

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my kind of poetry... you do write.......... full of his light.

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keep your spirit alive by being yourself for in your life, there is no one else. ...never give up and live upto expectations...good write....10 read mine i lived not upto..... fear not....o lord....

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Obed Souza 22 July 2009

Lovely poem! God knows everything is possible dreams for the faithfull are possibilities... Dreams ignite deeds and achievements.

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 July 2009

Shashendra Amalshan (7/28/2009 10: 49: 00 PM) | Delete this message this again is a great write sir.. i m 21 and see lots of challenges that gona come in my way.. i mean i feel i just started life...and many times i wanted go ashtray too.. still haven't... this is great write. for me.. always give me a kinda strength people in this site helped me so much too.... yet there are some dreams.. i dont know wehther they are ever gona come true.. this is nice

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Kranthi Pothineni 23 July 2009

Well, very motivating write. Wish to see more.

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Christine Kerr 23 July 2009

A great ego booster, and lift to end the night. Thanks Louis

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~ Jon London ~ 22 July 2009

Lovely inspiring piece louis...excellent message to share my friend 10

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Heather S 22 July 2009

thank you Mr Louis for this wonderful write, it all seems to be written about me, I see that in many of your poems.After reading them i feel so much better about myself. 10/10, well done -Heather

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