Not Static Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Not Static

Rating: 5.0


Light in the touching of light
Listens to the classical music rhythm
The shore rises by the concerned river

In the loneliness of time
On the mat of springtime grass
Dazzling dewdrops smile

Static identity of anything
Loses own form in the jigsaw of moment
Memory rides the phantom

The smallest atom of every life
In the bud of flower awakes revolutionary stream
Change comes in a distorted voice

Fire flame stands at the fair head
Extinguisher curtain goes to be ashes
Eternity in transitory teeth

Restless the staple fiber,
the world channel.......


19.08.2020 Chattogram

Wednesday, August 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cycle ,life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 19 August 2020

True words. Good thoughtful write.

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Poetic Sky 20 August 2020

MB of BD RESTLESS AFTER NIGHT WITH YOUNG VIRGINS STAPLE FIBRE, YOU are SAYING CYCLE CYLE OF LOVE AND DEATH.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 19 August 2020

Fire flame stands at fair head Extinguisher curtain goes to be ashes Eternity in transitory teeth, so happy to read this stanza, Mahtab poet! Extraordinary excellent poem, I hear your transitory teeth! I have enjoyed a very lot!

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Denis Mair 19 August 2020

There is a thread that ties the past self to the future self- -it is the main channel of time's river; it is the inherent soul-force of each living thing. Because our intuition is not static, it can catch a picture of this flowing JIGSAW MOMENT.

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Ruta Mohapatra 19 August 2020

In the loneliness of time On the mat of springtime grass Dazzling dewdrops smile.....Nice stanza!

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M Asim Nehal 19 August 2020

Excellent! ! ! ! Fire flame stands at fair head Extinguisher curtain goes to be ashes Eternity in transitory teeth Nicely written///10+

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