Not Poetry This Is Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Not Poetry This Is

Rating: 4.9


Life is indecisive stage answers to all kind of questions

Life, where the performer is an answer sheet

Poetic words are natural crystal mirror
where the poet finds out himself spontaneously

The poetic expression is thoughtful interlink of knowing self

I never wanted you but poetic life; because
falsehood is eternally beautiful

The lie is mighty invisible; visible is
always weaker than invisible

No prayer there is in my pen; fears make me
not pious but repentant of opportunity

Who will forgive me I do not know but if I embezzle
the rights of invisibility please pardon otherwise punish...

Not poetry this is but a verbose aristocracy
where truth and falsehood is substitute beauty

19.05.2020 Chattogram

Wednesday, May 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 20 May 2020

Verbose aristocracy where truth and falsehood is substitute beauty. Beautiful written and expressed.

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Michael Walkerjohn 20 May 2020

Aloha Mahtab and Cheers! " tears or fears" or covid beers; where? near here? or there? everywhere? Best we each check our underwear! Yea, there too! in da food, in da air, in da poo, phuuck US all running! Not near fast enough! One infected person breathing for more than a moment equals? Whatever! Fine Wright Worthy of a 'Bounce'... IAM a pouncing! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of our relations... Michaelw1two

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 May 2020

Not poetry this is but verbose aristocracy where truth and falsehood is substitute beauty

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 May 2020

You are right when it is about poetry. Very beautifully crafted. 'oetic words are natural crystal mirror where poet finds out himself spontaneously Poetic expression is thoughtful interlink of knowing self'... is so nice Thanks for posting such a lovely write.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 June 2020

An exceptional poem very well composed...10+++

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Valsa George 31 May 2020

Poetry will reveal the inner man, however hard we try to conceal our thoughts by putting on a mask. Looking in the mirror of all the poems one has written from time to time, he himself and others will be able to find out who he is and what type of a life he has been leading. A poem of profound thoughts!

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Mj Lemon 30 May 2020

Yes, poetry indeed will tear down any facade, any mask we wish to use as a way of misguiding or hiding, There is no barrier when one explores life through verse. This poem is going to myfavourites.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2020

Who will forgive me? ! Facing the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 26 May 2020

.....visible is always weaker than invisible....great write. anjandev roy.

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