Criticism can make a person worried
It can also cut the heart and mind
So, we mustn't criticize other
Rather we should behave in good manner.
We must behave one in reserved manner
Cause it provides him pleasure and glee
One mustn't be insulted or undervalued
We must use the evaluating words and phrases.
We should always follow positive manner
Negative statement brings grief and agony
So we have to go through positive path
This gives pleasure, elation and jolly.
It is better to follow divine path ever
We are all the creations of Supreme God
We should follow his words and principles
We ought to deserve sincere statements
I agree with you views, criticism with hard and unpleasant words may give permanent wounds hence choice of words are very important, no two opinions on this. A coin has two sides and better to explore the good qualities rather than highlighting shortcomings. Thought provoking poem...10+++
We must behave one in reserved manner Cause it provides him pleasure and glee One mustn't be insulted or undervalued We must use the evaluating words and phrases- - - - I agree with you absolutely. Constructive crtiticism is a different thing, that every writer should welcome so as to improve oneself. Criticism in harsh words can cause mental agony and discourage a writer from writing.
Manners! ! ! Let us live in peace with each other. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Practical wisdom to be followed in life from a well-meaning heart.. The poet must have felt the need of saying this from what he might have seen. An old poem still relevant.
Golden rules for good behavior! Words can cut, also heal! Let our words be a balm to heal and not a knife to cut! One who uses gentle words and unleashes positive energy will be loved by others! Unnecessary criticism is always abhorred! Your poems are so full of thoughts to guide one in life. Kumaramani sir!
There are some on this site that should read this and follow its precepts- I have seen comments that are just plain mean-minded, mean-spirited, and of absolutely no help to a young writer. We are supposed to be lovers of literature here and that means enjoying the efforts of the new writers and to encouragfe them to learn the ways to express and convey! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++++
like it yes- Don’t the index finger aim at others finding faults before doing it look remaining other three aiming at yourself!
We shall love all and give love. Criticizing is not at all good. A timely penned valuable poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
People are always too quick to criticize others, if they think someone is doing something wrong they should give them an helping hand instead of criticizing them. Let's build confidence not feed negativity. A great write.
I concur............