Nuggets Of Wisdom.No.6. On Captaincy Poem by Valsa George

Nuggets Of Wisdom.No.6. On Captaincy

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CAPTAIN

To steer a ship through rugged seas
And divert it from shoals and rocks
There need to be a captain at the deck
Or else the vessel is sure to wreck

Has any paper boat from its source
Charted its own safe course
Or ever reached the port
Without any malign force to contort?

With no one to steer the course
The ship is like an unbridled horse
Any system will rot to naught
Without a leader at the helm to direct!

Monday, December 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: captain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Om Chawla 24 December 2013

Quite true, Valsa. Shazia's comments and your response are so very appropriate, but the problem with our nations is of finding an honest 'captain' in the current highly vitiated and corrupted environ.

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Scotty Dogg 14 December 2013

Beautiful and so true! Nice effort here!

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 December 2013

Beautiful nugget....A ship without a Captain is like the uncontrolled horse. Dont know which direction its running. Loved reading it.

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Shahzia Batool 10 December 2013

This piece is so studded with imagery made of rich centralized metaphors which click the affected ones at once... I am honored Ms. Valsa George & Dinesh ji...who can measure the elation of a school kid on whose work his able teachers write VERY GOOD...i am feeling so original like that...i am encouraged! thank you so much...regards, shahzia...

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Dinesan Madathil 10 December 2013

Hats off to Miss Shahzia for reading the illegible and all other comments posted earlier have been nullified.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 August 2022

I quote, 'With no one to steer the course The ship is like an unbridled horse' and unquote!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2020

Each and every stanza stands out that emphasizes the need to have a leader....a leader with great qualities to direct us towards success in our endeavors. A great poem well executed. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2020

A wonderful and powerful poem beautifully crafted and conveyed with great imagery and metaphor. In life we truly need a leader that help us to identify, understand and define our purpose.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 November 2019

without pioneer none can balance the up-down of life!

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Lovely lessons of leadership or the need there of!

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