O' Love Poem by Bharati Nayak

O' Love

Rating: 5.0


I felt you coming
In the hissing of mango leaves
In the enchanting fragrances of spring breeze
In the melancholy cuckoo's song and
In the melodies of nature.

Oh what a feeling!
I saw you everywhere
In the darkness of night
In the brightness of sun light.

I feel you deep within
When the sky is overcast with clouds
When gloom and miseries shroud
When agonies oppress the heart
Indifference and callousness
choke me to death
You take me to your loving care
And surround me with your protective wall.

I hear your footsteps
As if to whisper in my ear
And sing the song of life
Asking me not to despair.

There are times when I cry
I see you also crying
I wipe my tears
As if it is yours
I feel your touch
Agony and anguish
Vanish from heart.

When a heart prays
Prays earnestly to her Lord
To come and save her tortured soul,
Oh God! You shower your mercy
And appear in the garb of Love.

Thursday, February 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,spirituality,valentines day
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today is Valentine's Day and so I share here one of my old composition written on 29th November 2005.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 February 2019

Wow so well written, great imageries, nice flow and articulate writing. The expression of love is magical.10+++

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Bharati Nayak 28 February 2019

Thank you Mohammed Asim Nehal for your appreciation.

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Valsa George 27 February 2019

Love is a soothing balm..... bandaging all our inner bruises. The feeling that there is a loved one around to share our joy and sorrow is so edifying! Enjoyed this passionate and spontaneous expression of love! A 10

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Bharati Nayak 27 February 2019

Thank you Madam for visiting my poem.Your comments are always appreciated.

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2022

More ((Beautiful)) than i can say! .. Beyond # S! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 12 December 2022

Such a deep connection that touches the heart and the soul! ..

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Sandra Feldman 21 October 2021

This poem is absolutely beautiful and indescribably unique as it describes the feelings that love provokes so perfectly. A most moving and unforgettable work of art

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 October 2021

I saw you everywhere......I feel you deep within When the sky is overcast with clouds When gloom and miseries shroud When agonies oppress the heart Indifference and callousness choke me to death......absolutely brilliant. Loved the poetic expression!

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 March 2019

Lines so fragrant with emotions, an apt poem for The Day.

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Bharati Nayak 24 May 2019

While revisiting this poem I found your lovely comment to my delight.Thank you Sir for such high opinion about the poem.

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