Life is an
Ocean of obstacles
Wave after wave
Lashing out at the shore
Depicting the vulnerability
Of life's barrage.
© Aarzoo Mehek
Waves are perfect metaphor for the obstacles we face in free progress in life. Beautiful expression of the facts of life.
The poem reminds one Rumi’s poems: “I've forsaken this entire universe for the love of YOU O Allah! come and reside in my heart, Now there is solitude”.... Great...
Life is such dear poetess Aarzoo..a poem of value and great substance. Top score.
And after another like breathe-in and breathe-out. Wonderful perception about life.10++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is really fascinating. Life is full of bitter truths and harsh realities and our defences remain vulnerable against forces that are inimical to us. Thanks for this profound poem of twenty words.