Ocean Of Obstacles Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Ocean Of Obstacles

Rating: 4.3


Life is an
Ocean of obstacles
Wave after wave
Lashing out at the shore
Depicting the vulnerability
Of life's barrage.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Ocean Of Obstacles
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 18 July 2020

This is really fascinating. Life is full of bitter truths and harsh realities and our defences remain vulnerable against forces that are inimical to us. Thanks for this profound poem of twenty words.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 July 2020

Waves are perfect metaphor for the obstacles we face in free progress in life. Beautiful expression of the facts of life.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 July 2020

The poem reminds one Rumi’s poems: “I've forsaken this entire universe for the love of YOU O Allah! come and reside in my heart, Now there is solitude”.... Great...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 August 2022

This is an impactful poem... truthfully put

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 April 2022

Life is such dear poetess Aarzoo..a poem of value and great substance. Top score.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 27 July 2020

Beautiful and philosophical composition, Arzoo.

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Anjandev Roy 21 July 2020

This is absolutely true......thank u......anjandev roy.

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M Asim Nehal 19 July 2020

And after another like breathe-in and breathe-out. Wonderful perception about life.10++

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