Oceans Beauty. (A Haiku) Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Oceans Beauty. (A Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


Under, oceans blue.
Fishes, swimming so deep down.
Wish I had, your view.

Sunday, July 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: awe,nature,ocean,wonder
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 05 August 2017

Vivid image and thought captured in a few words. Well written, Rebecca! I absolutely agree. There are two worlds: the one above water, and the one below.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Laurie, For Your Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is Ever So Beautifully Painted In Rhythm And In Time, It Stays In Heart, And In Mind! ! ! ! ! ... Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 04 August 2017

Simply gorgeous write, wonderful new you!

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Rebecca Navarre 05 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Soul, For Such A Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! You Are An Incredibly Wonderful And Beautifully Deep Poet To Read! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 31 July 2017

Hi Becca, It is said, : All that are seen are beautiful; those unseen are most beautiful: : Your lines Under, oceans blue. Fishes, swimming so deep down. and not visible to naked eyes. But are very colourful and beautiful, as we have seen in the pictures. So it is just our wish: Wish I had, your view: It is the same case with our thoughts. The thoughts, dreams deep within our heart are more beautiful... great poem; quite picturesque.. a wonderful haiku.. A 100++ for this lovely one.

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Rebecca Navarre 01 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Unnikrishan, For Such A Beautiful! ! ! ! ! .... And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is So Beautifully Powerful! ! ! ! ! And Moving! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2017

Concise and beautiful. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 01 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Your Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Is So Beautifully Enlightening To Your Readers Hearts! ! ! ! ! Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Practicing Poetess 30 July 2017

Once you get this girl started on writing haikus, there's just no stopping her! :) (Are you saying that you wish you were a fish?) Very pretty haiku! Nicely done!

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Rebecca Navarre 01 August 2017

Thank You! ! ! Practicing Poetess, For Very Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! :) Your Poems Are Beautifully Strong And Deep! ! ! ! ! To Your Readers Soul They Speak! ! ! ! ! Wouldn't It Be Beautiful To See All They See! ! ! ! ! ...A Mermaid Maybe, Fun To Dream! ! ! ! ! And Be? ? ? ...hee. Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! Many Smiles! ! ! ! !

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