Ode To Nature Poem by Walter W. Safar

Ode To Nature

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I'm looking at the starlit sky,
I'm looking at the timeless heavenly plough land,
Along which the Father sows the seed of eternal light.
I'm looking at the falling star,
Mercifully weaving the magic light
Above the lonely dreamer on his path of dreams -
Let us hurry, not for our sake, not for lost dreams,
But for the future -
I'm looking at the drop of rain on the wild rose's petal
Early in the morning,
How it trembles in its purity and nakedness,
Like an angelic clear tear on the face of an abandoned woman;
I'm looking at the rose in early bloom
Waking and offering itself to the brand new day
Like a woman to her beloved -
Once you shall return and wipe away the tears
We kissed and smelled under the Northern Star's light together -
I am humbly looking at the sun as if it was a heavenly blacksmith,
Welding harmony within human souls.
I am looking at the centennial oak,
As if it was an eternally young pharmacist,
Offering its healthy medicine for free.
I'm looking at the tree's straight posture,
Drowning its young branches
In the embrace of the sun's golden light,
While the wind is brotherly fondling its wrinkled face,
Whispering on about its thousand years of loneliness and loving -
Don't be afraid to fall in love, love is the seed of new life -
I'm looking at the man who doesn't hear
Nor understand what nature is trying to tell him.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 10 April 2019

A free expression of poem and its message of love are interesting to read! Thanks for sharing here, my friend!

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Louis Rams 10 April 2019

nature in its beauty is well put in this Ode To Nature

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2019

I'm looking at the drop of rain on the wild rose's petal Early in the morning, How it trembles in its purity and nakedness, Like an angelic clear tear on the face of an abandoned woman; I'm looking at the rose in early bloom.......oh how very poetic are you my dear poet. many praises dear poet. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 11 April 2019

We kissed and smelled under the Northern Star's light together - I am humbly looking at the sun as if it was a heavenly blacksmith........../// heat touchingly expressed, really really a beautiful poem; superb hand in writings poem

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M Asim Nehal 11 April 2019

Wonderful poem, thanks for inviting me to read this poem, Nicely written, my pick from your poem: Don't be afraid to fall in love, love is the seed of new life - I'm looking at the man who doesn't hear Nor understand what nature is trying to tell him.

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I am looking at the man who doesn't hear Nor understand what nature is trying to tell him. ......beautiful!

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Mary Skarpathiotaki 19 April 2019

Very very sensitif option my friend...EXCELLENT 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Kyvin Nash 18 April 2019

Beautiful poem Mr Safar, nature wonderfully created by God only if man(bad scientist) can comprehend this and stop destroying the natural for money, this world is wonderfully made, thank you for sharing a beautiful writ+10

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Prabir Gayen 12 April 2019

Like an angelic clear tear on the face of an abandoned woman; I'm looking at the rose in early bloom Waking and offering itself to the brand new day Like a woman to her beloved.. ...fine poetry

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Elena Sandu 12 April 2019

Yes indeed, nature has many teachings, if only we would stop to watch, listen, we could learn, same as the Walter W. Safar does penning these beautiful verses. Thank you!

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