Thirst...
Parting between lips
drops a cup of hissing feels
sweet and kiss thirsty…
Hunger...
Perching on the mind
searches out for tasty food
down yard lust hungry…
And Sleep...
Eaten swollen breads
drunk on sweetened bottle wine
lie bodies half sleepy...
12 10 08
Kesav, lots of images here; satisfied I hope. Well written poetry 10/10
Softly but with passion fills the air of your talent... Very nicely construted, and to the point... Bonnie
A very well constructed poem and a pleasure to read. Best wishes, Andrew
a fine image of all three sir...and also you bring out the various faces of each....10
these three constitute 'triad' brahma vishnu maheswara... father son and the holy spirit
Good images come to my mind here...strong write...thank you
Beautiful and exquisite portrayal of Thirst, Hunger and Sleep... Really enjoyed reading... Thanks... Regards, Kamran
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sensual underpinnings...penned with much taste....I see that two of the three verses are in perfect traditional Zen Haiku metreing(5-7-5) ....And i don't think this was by accident! Astute, & innovative write, Kesav... P.S...If you so celebrate, i herenow wish you a joyous, and reflective Diwali Feast.May the power of Knowledge, and spiritual light be with you & yours. fjr **