On The Sea-Shore, Smell Of Iodine Comments
On the sea-shore, smell of iodine,
and square as in Sicily, and dancing.
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A modern Shakespeare flows through your so nicely crafted poem.
'Already darkness, and the end is in sight: Ophelia crying in an empty hut. And Hamlet walks to and fro with white headband, in order to be recognized by the Ghost in the gloom. '...is so nice. Ah! ! Those characters of Shakespear have come alive here. Enjoyed. Congrats.
Characters in classics reincarnated in modern poetry in a wonderful manner. Congrats on the modern POD.
All over the world — the prison. The poet had realized at least a simple truth escaping from the trance of Shakespearean drama.
Superb poem, I like the theme but I am not sure about the smell of Iodine....10+++
Nice poem portraying Shakespeare's characters in your words...Hamlet is ever Hamlet- 10
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12/5/2025 12:12:35 AM # 1.0.0
On The Sea-Shore is wonderfully penned, thanks for sharing