Opinions Poem by Beach Girl

the moon has a partial prosaic view being rather plain in its own image. the sun on the other hand is mysterious in its grandeur and casting a comprehensive view upon the universe. nicely written

Quarrel between two beauties! However, your poems are pretty alright. Don't need to ask either the sun or the moon.

ask the sun, The sun knows everything. good write. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. A poignant work of art.......................

well, i looked at it again. it is STILL a truly beautiful AND clever poem. :) bri

You are right of course Bri! I've corrected the error! Thanks so much. :)

I enjoyed this very refreshing write on the moon and the sun. I do believe that the moon has some kind of influence on the mind, so has the sun. You can't look at any of them for a long period of time. Both are equally important to our existence on earth. You wrote this very well. Regards.

i wont agree if the moon forms that opinion, as now i have read your poetry myself...certainly, if given a chance to say something, the moon wont dare to challenge the platform of her praises! ! !