Organ Donation Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

New taste/newstyle with full of love.........10+

You have expressed the idea in simple words, and yet got the message across. Good one.

Written from the heart, as always touching and wise, 10 Lynda xx

A very touching poem, whose last word sums up the most difficult part... 10

it is written exelint i love the way u play with the words it is exelent, and the tears and the heart tells it all.i love it. but then u have to have a knolage of poems to understand it.

Very touching whisper.... 10 Tsira

very nice. i enjoyed. Eid Mubarak to you and your family.

i really like this poem especially 'you sighed i cried rainy eyes replied'..however, i don't really understand the 'do that' line i think that part needs a bit improving so that the poem flows a little but other than that good job! =)

Heart melts when someone says ' i love you'

I like the way it's listed it's sweet the emotion slightly bitter yet sweet