Origins In A Name Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Origins In A Name

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This I was told
the name which I hold
is an identity of my own
to stand tall when called upon
to proudly respond
yet could it be true?
By first signs of existence
the original owner was never found
a runaway, neglecting a future
which he helped create

Is that classified as a cowardly man?
I never understood nor do I care
but yet how could one abandon
a future which a name is given?
To have their creators blessing
than destroy the cells which contain past lessons
never stressing but could be destined
to a coward's blessing

The seed of a forgotten soldier
through me a humble beginning
made better, trying to reclaim honor
in this name I claim ownership

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This piece is about my feelings towards my last name
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 24 September 2012

Beautiful write! Look what he is missing! ! ! ! You claim that honour all for you please!

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Victoria Gauci 02 February 2013

I really like this. I especially like the second verse. To have their creator's blessing than destroy the cells which contain past lessons. Very good.

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Neela Nath Das 01 October 2012

trying to reclaim honor/in this name I claim ownership---these two lines are catch lines of this wonderful poem. The urge within will show you the way!

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Lovable Wisdom 25 September 2012

i LOVE THIS POEM IT SPEAKS TO THE NAME IN WHICH WE ORIGINATE FRM

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 25 September 2012

Last name..yours is great. like mine, mine is Anderson, son of a man! you did a nice work again well done

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Nurain Ali-balogun 25 September 2012

Wonderful poem, our your last name is like a rope, a tiny rope tracing you to your very root, telling you a tale of your ancestors, their bravery, successes and short comings. Great poem by the way.

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