Out Of The Night Poem by Ernestine Northover

Out Of The Night

Rating: 5.0


The singer sang a soft refrain,
standing so still out in the rain.
With such emotion she did sing
to whom this song, did appertain.

As peaceful as a lullaby,
her voice rose up and touched the sky.
Gentle on both the heart and mind,
like a freed bird, her notes did fly.

Who was she trying to persuade,
would she be leaving here dismayed.
As over hair and down her coat,
water tumbled in a cascade.

Out of the night his voice did sound,
as he traversed the sodden ground.
With arms outstretched he called her name,
and knew that here his bliss he’d found.


© Ernestine Northover

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 07 April 2008

really good imagery, i wish we could all find bliss like the lucky man you write of

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David Harris 07 April 2008

Ernestine, sparkling imagery with beautiful poem. It reminded of the old musical Singing In The Rain. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend. David

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Andrew Blakemore 14 March 2009

Just beautiful Ernestine, loved the unusual structure too. Love, Andrew xx

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Duncan Wyllie 20 April 2008

Captivating lines Ernestine, my favourite part: As peaceful as a lullaby, her voice rose up and touched the sky. Gentle on both the heart and mind, like a freed bird, her notes did fly. WOW! Love duncan X

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Abha Sharma 10 April 2008

softly soothing romantic and musical treat.....liked it..

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Lynda Robson 07 April 2008

A lovely melodic piece with wonderful imagery as always,10 for this, Lynda xx

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Debora Short 07 April 2008

There is a delightful and lovely imagery threaded with a powerful Christ-like love and a sweet melodious read to this penning, Ernestine. Great penning! Blessings, Debora

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