Overwrought Mind Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Overwrought Mind

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Where there was pain
There is only numbness now
You had written pages
But there is only blankness now
Mind no longer feels the heart's ache
Heart no longer seeks the balm
Among the stars, the moon is lost
The eyes crave its sight no more
What was once a delight
A sore it is now
The clouds cried lavishly
But the earth still gasps from thirst
That's the world you see
Through the imagination overwrought
For the vision of the eyes
Is but an offshoot of the brain
The light cannot touch the pupils
When the mind is a dark cell
Where moss grows on the walls
And fear eats away at the heart.


Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Thursday, January 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Galina Italyanskaya 07 January 2016

Despair is devastating and can bring real depression. Your poem expresses it very well. Powerful writing! Thank you for sharing, Nosheen!

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Nosheen Irfan 07 January 2016

Thank you so much Galina for appreciation.

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Pregnant with pain yet crammed with a creativity that is both compelling and captivating! From the womb of pain has been birthed much gain. Well done my friend!

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

Problems of the earth! Here to stay and learn. Nice work.

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Manonton Dalan 08 January 2016

when a glass is filled it can't take anymore but empty

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2016

Visions of eyes are ever wonderful. We need to explore and realize these. Fear eats away heart but we need no fear in life more. Very thoughtful poem shared really.10

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Nosheen Irfan 08 January 2016

Thank you Sir. You are always very encouraging. Truly appreciate it.

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M Asim Nehal 07 January 2016

Awesome poem...I translated this to Hindi/Urdu.....10+++

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Nosheen Irfan 08 January 2016

Thank you Asim. It is written in the style of Urdu poetry. You chose well for Urdu translation. Thanks.

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