How sun dies
In rocks
In waters
How fire cages
The smoke
In tears
Wonderful, Ali. Even the eternal has some resting place. I am discovering a sense of peace in your words.
Wow dear, this is wonderful....the sunrise and sunset play, then as the birth of soot from fiery air to be into this thought made your poem expensive..i loved it
This amazing thought shared here generates more thoughts in mind. Sun's life journey is witnessed. This poem is really very brilliant...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Intriguing poem, my friend. I wonder, I wonder, how long will the sun keep burning