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Pedestrian Need

Rating: 4.9
I need concrete with sharp corners
Green waves crashing onto rocks
Brisk air and salty stares

Wings on birds, cats with claws
Fast dogs and circus scares
I need clocks and border stops

To get to heaven you need these things
Playground noises and bumblebees
Honest chocolate, gold with diamond rings
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Brian Dorn 06 October 2006
A collage of seemingly unrelated items and ending with a line that gives it a truely photomontage feel. Very artsy, Tailor... well done! Brian
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Séamus Fox 27 September 2006
Tailor this is excellent the way you have blended all these aspects of life and the end got me I must admit didnt expect it at all! ! Séamus
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Lori Boulard 09 September 2006
Yes, honest chocolate and honest Mondays, indeed. Bring 'em on! I'm putting this into my favorites for a rainy day. You have a nice pace and way with words. I hope to see more of your poems here. Cheers, Lori
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fanniesson - 07 September 2006
I see this all coming in a flash to you Me, I find it hard to see you coming back to this adding lines to it over a day or two one great read for me, perfect poem.
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Trucker Jeff 03 September 2006
You my friend are not a word smith you are the word smitty.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 02 September 2006
Vivid imagework is the main player to this intruiging work....i agree w/ declan as so far as the slam dunk close.This allowed the entire piece to remesh together, tighter & stronger & ergo allowing the work to stand in a raddiant light. Stellar work, Tailor''''''''''''''''''''fjr
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Declan McHenry 31 August 2006
It's the last line that sold this piece to me.Vibrant images. Provocation for the mind.
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Alison Cassidy 31 August 2006
Interesting arresting images, strong rhythmic swing to this. I agree with Will's cubist poem description. Great stuff. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Duncan Wyllie 28 August 2006
'I sling my disappointments at the sun' That line really stood out for me Thankyou Tailor Love duncan X
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Will Barber 27 August 2006
Incredible write, Tailor. So much to praise, so much to contemplate. So much to wonder about. If there is such a thing as a Cubist poem, this is one. - Will
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