Peerless Poetess Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Peerless Poetess

Rating: 5.0


all these blank verses
she was about to voice
under aegis of love
O dear, look alive!

above wandering earth and sky
it goes its own righteous way
it’s relaxed more and more
we will remember evermore

stay with me
O baby, stay with me
thank you, my baby
for loving me

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Hema Kadir)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 23 May 2009

hi Ahmad its so nice to say kind an nice words about our own community...and written so well cheers

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Catrina Heart 23 May 2009

You have penned great poems of dedication i am just wondering why all poems now coming from you have the same end stanzas.........

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Michael Gale 23 June 2009

Nicely done. MJG... Of the world, of poetry.

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a nice feelig written in nice way. shan

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Alf Hutchison 30 May 2009

We should all indeed give thanks especially to those who love us.. well done Alf

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 May 2009

stay with me O baby, stay with me thank you, my baby for loving me This is the burden of every song at the end.

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Naidz Ladia 23 May 2009

a nice dedication to a nice poetess..cheers, , naizz

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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