Penance Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

Penance

Rating: 4.2


All the penances, and bargains for what?

Imagine a scenario in which all the motivations
To live arrives at a dead point.

Only an arbitrary idea likely
The demon is raking my psyche.

© Aarzoo Mehek

Penance
Wednesday, September 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: demons,motivation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sharad Bhatia 16 September 2020

A bitter truth of life Thank you very much for sharing such a beautiful And Mind opening poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 May 2023

Beautiful. Do you know why this wonderful poem is rated 4.2? Because of an evil group who disrespect the rating system in evil ways!

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2020

Life's journey! Musing along! ! At the point of death! ! ! ! Able to survive. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 September 2020

Such moods come and pass. Motivation dies only to resurrect.

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Rajnish Manga 16 September 2020

The depth of your musing about life remains most enigmatic to the ordinary mortals like me. The scenario of everything positive meeting a dead end is horrifying. Then the idea of a demon raking one's psyche is ghastly, too. On the other hand, these are the circumstances which provide necessary moral strength and atmosphere for penance. Thanks, Dear Poet.

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Varsha M 16 September 2020

A very painful poetry and yes at times we all come across such situations but believe me there is yet more ahead. Hold on and move.

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