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Pendulum

Rating: 5.0

My heart is a dot
is a dot of ego
You can see
no black hole
Nothing else
it can show
My heart is a sky
is a sky of love
Nothing little
you can hide

You can't seek
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Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Binayakumar Mohanty 22 November 2017

I fly in the sky of ego And love Like a pendulum.The crisis nicely crafted.Thanks for sharing.10++++

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Susan Williams 26 January 2020

I fly in the sky of ego and love My heart's pendulum - - - dang but you can put it together! ! ! love your style! 10++++++++++

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Mj Lemon 26 December 2017

Ali, this is genius. Indeed what you say about the heart is so true....the heart can be tiny and unyielding and unforgiving. But it also has the potential to be a wide and all encompassing as the sky. A wonderful poem.

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Unwritten Soul 23 November 2017

Clever idea, and way of writing...it really your style and of course its wonderful! by the way your heart is also llike a mirror that fool gravity because you can levitate the feeling while you still standing here...and it reshaped by what others show to it...also yours is a pendulum that not swing but moving freely!

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Valsa George 23 November 2017

Torn between ego and love, your life sways like a pendulum! That's the predicament of most of the humans! We cannot be all love, sometimes ego shows its ugly head! Great understanding of human frailty!

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Nosheen Irfan 23 November 2017

Beautiful poem. Caught between love and ego, the dilemma of the human heart. Nice flow n imagery. A big 10.

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