If I open the door...
When, it is knocking
If it is pain outside...
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The fear if life! But, there is hope out there. Thanks for sharing.
Wow a short poem on caution, poetic muse. Yes we need to be alert, pain cud b outside! Nice to read u again.
when a person is not attached to external contacts, he attains eternal bliss, very fine.
Dare it to greet
or leave it away from your feet
Unless you chest can maintain the beats_Soul
If there is pain or danger outside and if someone knocks just for a shelter, it is humane on our part to open the door for him! The dilemma is intensely felt here!
Thank you Ali for your sweet comment on my 300th poem!
What you convey here is something so profound. An act, any act, can bring all sorts of consequences. We may opt to open a door when we hear the knock, but the outsider seeking entry may not be what or whom we expect. This is a gem, Muhammad.
I like the abruptness of this- -it conveys uncertainty. Good job!
No risk no game...............................................................
with such 'depth of Truth' in a Tiny poem, of our lives in this unforgiving world of Social mess we created! Thanks for sharing! !
That's so beautifully put. We all fear what might happen. We all are scared of getting hurt. The opportunity might be good or bad, we can only know by opening the door.10
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