Ali Adamson

Probability - Poem by Ali Adamson

If I open the door...

When, it is knocking

If it is pain outside...

Topic(s) of this poem: Fear

Comments about Probability by Ali Adamson

  • (9/13/2017 11:51:00 PM)

    What you convey here is something so profound. An act, any act, can bring all sorts of consequences. We may opt to open a door when we hear the knock, but the outsider seeking entry may not be what or whom we expect. This is a gem, Muhammad. (Report) Reply

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  • Susan Williams (3/25/2017 3:20:00 PM)

    I like the abruptness of this- -it conveys uncertainty. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (1/28/2017 8:54:00 PM)

    No risk no game............................................................... (Report) Reply

  • Siddartha Montik (12/5/2016)

    Simple yet..
    with such 'depth of Truth' in a Tiny poem, of our lives in this unforgiving world of Social mess we created! Thanks for sharing! ! (Report) Reply

  • Nosheen Irfan (8/13/2016 5:04:00 AM)

    That's so beautifully put. We all fear what might happen. We all are scared of getting hurt. The opportunity might be good or bad, we can only know by opening the door.10 (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (7/25/2016 5:03:00 AM)

    The fear if life! But, there is hope out there. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (7/8/2014 1:48:00 AM)

    Wow a short poem on caution, poetic muse. Yes we need to be alert, pain cud b outside! Nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (4/11/2014 5:53:00 AM)

    when a person is not attached to external contacts, he attains eternal bliss, very fine. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (4/5/2014)

    Dare it to greet
    or leave it away from your feet
    Unless you chest can maintain the beats_Soul
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  • Valsa George (3/29/2014 7:07:00 AM)

    If there is pain or danger outside and if someone knocks just for a shelter, it is humane on our part to open the door for him! The dilemma is intensely felt here!

    Thank you Ali for your sweet comment on my 300th poem!
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (3/24/2014 10:01:00 PM)

    Knocking may indicate pain outside. To open or not to open is the question. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (3/24/2014 11:51:00 AM)

    this the main issue...! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 22, 2014

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