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If I open the door...

When, it is knocking

If it is pain outside...

Friday, March 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Fear
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 25 July 2016

The fear if life! But, there is hope out there. Thanks for sharing.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 July 2014

Wow a short poem on caution, poetic muse. Yes we need to be alert, pain cud b outside! Nice to read u again.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 April 2014

when a person is not attached to external contacts, he attains eternal bliss, very fine.

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Unwritten Soul 05 April 2014

Dare it to greet or leave it away from your feet Unless you chest can maintain the beats_Soul

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Valsa George 29 March 2014

If there is pain or danger outside and if someone knocks just for a shelter, it is humane on our part to open the door for him! The dilemma is intensely felt here! Thank you Ali for your sweet comment on my 300th poem!

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Mj Lemon 13 September 2017

What you convey here is something so profound. An act, any act, can bring all sorts of consequences. We may opt to open a door when we hear the knock, but the outsider seeking entry may not be what or whom we expect. This is a gem, Muhammad.

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Susan Williams 25 March 2017

I like the abruptness of this- -it conveys uncertainty. Good job!

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Akhtar Jawad 28 January 2017

No risk no game...............................................................

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Siddartha Montik 05 December 2016

with such 'depth of Truth' in a Tiny poem, of our lives in this unforgiving world of Social mess we created! Thanks for sharing! !

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Nosheen Irfan 13 August 2016

That's so beautifully put. We all fear what might happen. We all are scared of getting hurt. The opportunity might be good or bad, we can only know by opening the door.10

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