Penning Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Penning

Rating: 4.9


I'm stitching the feelings, the imaginations
by the letters of hope
And stitching the loneliness, the realities
by the bin of rejected envelop

The autumnal leaf falling down
and touching the ripple's womb

The magpie sucking
the nectar of kidney bean's flowers

Since last year, November 17,2019
I'm in the panicked earth

Doomsday comes every moment
To the Chinese Cov-19 infected soul

Failure touching me every final staircase crossing
Success is now a miracle for my life although sunlight rising

Nowadays, winter sunset depicting the tomb in my marching
Endless the puzzling end pricking my entrepreneur's ink

May be an immature death of a pen very soon
Shattered life will be lost in some brutal loan


-01.12.2020 Chattogram

Tuesday, December 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: distress,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 01 December 2020

Are you okay Mahtab? Quite a disturbing note. Things are changed in the midst if covid. But staying and strong is the need if the time. A heartfelt cry. May Allah keep you all safe

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2020

The autumnal leaf falling down/and touching the ripple's womb....wonderful poetic expression. An excellent poem.......5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 December 2020

Dear Poet Mahtab, Reading this poem gives me a very painful feeling. Hope you are okay. The Covid 19 has made a deep impact on people all over the world. But i pray that all will be well soon and your pen will flow with hundreds of poems more. Marvellous write though a sad poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 December 2020

A well penned poem.... Truly poetic and magnificent....5 stars *****

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Khairul Ahsan 01 December 2020

'Maybe an immature death of a pen very soon Shattered life will be lost in some brutal loan' - Hope, that doesn't happen! May the poet's pen write on, and the fountains of poetry flow down!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 December 2020

very depressing feelings women stitch men use gum enjoy life's fun the end is far still if enjoy your life mb of bd you will still be happy like me i may touch 83 smiling have you read my Tribute to FLASHY DO read life is sudden..... enjoy it willingly till....

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Suresh Kumar Ek 01 December 2020

Stitching the feelings and lonliness In the covid era. The autumnal leaves Falling into he ripple's womb Terrible images Super poem

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