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Perfect Betrayal

Rating: 4.8

I met a magician
Amidst the fog by a lake
He lived in a cottage
And had a beard- black.
He wore a cloak of my dreams
His hands were soft just like mine
His face was cold like the chilly winds
I heard he kissed girls
And then disappeared.
Now here he was

Right in front of me
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Wednesday, August 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,life and death,lonely,love
Sylvia Frances Chan 09 March 2021

So never meet a magician, there will be no betrayal. Cutest composed creation, dear poetess. Very fascinating to read. An ardent story-poem from a passionate poetess, thank you for sharing

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Chinedu Dike 26 August 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation, very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, Asavri.

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Pamela Sinicrope 04 June 2017

This sounds like a story of toxic love- all encompassing to the point that the woman loses herself and is not strengthened by it, but quite the opposite.

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Carl Roussell 02 March 2018

I am not so sure about that, because he went singing that he fell in love with her

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Carl Roussell 02 March 2018

I have reread the poem and yes, your interpretation seems more accurate than my first response

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Asavri Dhillon 02 March 2018

that's true ma'am... thank you so much for reading my poem...: -)

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Tom Billsborough 15 September 2016

A very fine poem. Must read more of your work

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Asavri Dhillon 02 March 2018

Thank you so much sir...

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Amarjit Ghumman 03 August 2016

Heart touching. .nice. It has depth. .

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Asavri Dhillon 02 March 2018

Thank you so much ma'am

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