Perfect Night Poem by Rini Shibu

Perfect Night

Rating: 5.0


The aroma of the perfect night is more
pleasant than the smell of roses
The dryness of the summer
becomes cooler than the mist
When you feel deep vibes in silence
When your eyes are closed
And you hug your dreams
Though everything is dry
There is hope within you
Then you could feel the joy of love
When the moon is above
Leaving a little wetness in your heart

Tuesday, May 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 15 May 2018

This is a very nice and a very enjoyable poem about perfect night.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 May 2018

very beautifully and succinctly put across I thank R AND R for bringing me here to enjoy your urdu poetry translated lovely words all must endear and ur JAWAD J'IS lovely comments AND JAZIB KAMALVI AND KUMARMANI MAHAKUL ADD Rini Shibu all my new found fiends on PH

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 May 2018

The aroma of the perfect night is more pleasant than the smell of roses ...... ....... ...... ....... ..... Then you could feel the joy of love When the moon is above Leaving a little wetness in your heart......... The above lines are more impressive and much touching. Perfect Night has been perfectly painted.10

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Robert Murray Smith 15 May 2018

What a great poem invoking perfection.+++10 Robert

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Akhtar Jawad 15 May 2018

Emotional feelings of a man when he is about to sleep in a perfect that is ideal for sleeping and symbolizing a beloved making efforts to obstruct a deep sleep. The poem is a work of art by Rini Shibu!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2023

A perfect poem that divulges the aroma of perfect night. A wonderful poem dear poetess. Extremely well penned. Top marks!

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Susan Williams 17 May 2018

When your eyes are closed / And you hug your dreams- - -] That was a well-thought out image that readers will remember for a long long time.

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Kostas Lagos 17 May 2018

A perfect poem for a perfect night.

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 May 2018

A lovely poem on night! Night has its own lunar magnetism, which makes us drift in dreaming!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 May 2018

When the moon is above, ah, and your eyes are closed, you hug your dreams, that's the perfect night. Wonderful poem in most pleasant atmosphere, wondrous poem, Rini. For me very imaginable. A 10++++++for the vote

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