Petals Poem by Unwritten Soul

Petals

Rating: 4.5


Circle of petals
Hypnotizing eyes
Dancing by the wind
But...

Which part of flowers is important, to make it blooms beautifully?
Will the beauty fades when its gone?

The touch of soul
Awaken breath from body
We inhale and live
Days to years
But...

Which years of your age define your life?
Younger or later life?

Not that petal,
not that one year
It is not only one...
To make it beautiful
To see life is wonderful
But collectively they are...

If success greet, dont overjoy
If few bad things happen, dont conclude...
Till you end the journey, then you will agree

As whole, things are beautiful
Like petals array the colours
Become a flower

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After posting my writing 'Salvatore' last month i just want to keep sharing at least one writing/ thought per month. Petals is a title i pick for a simple sharing today, . At beginning it just a question ' which part of flowers that make it stand out beautiful, and which year in life make it great...'Petals' perhaps is a rush construction, sounding not muchvas your standard poetry but i like to share my thought in normal wording with a slight addition to it. i do feel that it is worth to share... So i share it here
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thembekile Ntshangase 10 November 2021

Beautiful writing

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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2021

This is an outstanding piece....thank u, dear poet.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 11 April 2021

Magnificent write and thought provoking Big Soul.

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