Picture Perfect Poem by Valsa George

Picture Perfect

Rating: 4.8


The baby sat joyfully on her lap
The mother on his tender thighs did tap
It tickled the boy to laugh and laugh
He was just one and a half

Both invariably enjoyed that sport
No one came in between their fun to abort
The baby had such fairy grace
Many a kiss she planted on his cherubic face

The blissful pair looked ever so cute
Who on earth can their oneness thwart?
It is a love that runs into eternity’s length
A bond that yields to no brutal strength

Joy gleamed in their dewy eyes
The mother huddled tight her lovely prize
On my mind’s lens is caught that image
I laminated it to keep it from all damage

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Grantham 18 October 2013

You painted a wonderful picture of a mother and son that has a special bond. The harshness of time will not separate this tie. The special moments and great love will withstand the test. A loving and inspiring write full of devotion.

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Dinesan Madathil 13 October 2013

This duo of MOM and SON will ever live in our minds as the most realistic symbols of filial affection and angelic innocence respectively, Madam Valsa.

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Tajudeen Shah 13 October 2013

absolute serenity! what a write on a very common, humble but heavenly scene!

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Hans Vr 13 October 2013

Good, a pleasure to read and feel the warmth of the relationship

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David Wood 12 October 2013

A delightful poem Valsa, I really enjoyed reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2019

The blissful pair looked ever so cute Who on earth can their oneness thwart? It is a love that runs into eternity’s length A bond that yields to no brutal strength...... so touching and impressive. Yes, it is love that runs into eternity's length. The love among child and mother immeasurable. A beautiful poem is well executed.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2017

Enjoyed that sport! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 November 2013

An apt title, a perfect poem of happiness to make one's day! 10/10. 'Both invariably enjoyed that sport No one came in between their fun to abort; ' Yes, it's a sport that both the participants heartily enjoy, as do the onlookers, and it has no losers. 'It is a love that runs into eternity’s length A bond that yields to no brutal strength' Absolutely! 'On my mind’s lens is caught that image I laminated it to keep it from all damage' Thanks for sharing with us, the 'laminated picture'. It will lie undamaged in our hearts too.

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Heather Wilkins 01 November 2013

the bond between mother and child can never be broken. It is a special love no one can understand except a mother and child. lovely write

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

Fun to read... motherly love to children is amazing subject!

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