Friday, March 23, 2012

Poet Journey Comments

Rating: 4.8

A journey begins with
A thought in our mind
Wise words are chosen.
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Lawrence Hiung
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A poet's journey is unending. Journey of mind…, of imagination, of thoughts

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Jasbir Chatterjee 04 April 2015

nice poem, once a poet, always a poet...Yes, everything starts with a thought...

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Dean Bottomley 05 April 2014

I like the poem and I love the sentiments expressed. Visually three 3 line verses then a 5 line verse then 3 then 4 then 3 then 5 is a bit off putting but the emotions and the way they are expressed verbally is awesome

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Lawrence H 30 April 2016

Thanks for your kind words

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Jasbir Chatterjee 05 April 2014

Your description of all that goes into writing poetry is accurate and beautifully expressed...

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Amitava Sur 04 April 2014

A wonderful expression of a poet through this penning.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 April 2014

Really beautiful, I like it.

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The poem is very nice to read and the poet told the innerfelt experience of the poet while writing a poetry. It is natural to express such feeling of inner experiences through a poem and creativity is good.

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Patricia Grantham 04 April 2014

Written very nicely and expressed. The journey of a poet is a long one. There are many roads to travel along the way. Try to stay on course. Nice.

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Leslie Philibert 04 April 2014

OK, but needs more original ideas..

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Michelle Claus 04 April 2014

an aspiration in soul mind - illuminated words

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Chandra Thiagarajan 04 April 2013

From the Thought in the mind and with emotions and expressions and after deep reflection the poet composes his poetry to share the lovely poems to the world ! Wonderful Journey of a Poet, Lawrence! !

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Hnt Var 05 April 2012

How beautifully said. I can relate to the journey completely

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Maria C. Pires Costa 04 April 2012

Authentic, sincere feelings, emotions make the poet's journey meaningful and reliable! That's what I have found here in this lovely example of your journey. May it be long, joyful and peaceful! I've really enjoyed it.

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Ramesh T A 04 April 2012

Nicely written about a poet's journey of writing poetry with one's mind travelling places just as in dreams!

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Lawrence H 28 March 2012

In this poem, I described my journey why I learn poetry writing. Sometimes, I am not sure how to compose a poem, perhaps I write prose poems or free verse, ode, found poetry. Traditional poetry is following the traditional form arrangements of lines and rhyme-scheme like sonnet, haiku, limericks, cinquains, couplets, diamantes, acrostic poems, etc.

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Walterrean Salley 23 March 2012

A long journey starts with a first step Never stop half way Complete it A message for the poet, and for anyone with set goals. Full of encouragement. Great job. Thank youu Lawrence.10/10

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 March 2012

Lawrence, quite inspirational! Nice..Thank you...

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