Poetry 4 - A Poetess With A White Swan Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

What an amazing depiction of the beautiful poetess like yourself :) On my fav list.5+

A really poetic expression, a beautiful poem.

This is indeed scintillating. Though, it is all about writing of poetry by the poetess who is inspired by lotus and swan and for that matter the entire nature at large, it is your skill and delicate touch which catapults the reader on a journey to the aesthetic world. Matchless portrayal and a grand spectacle of poetic excellence. Thank you so much, Geeta ji.

While I was seeing the graphic appearing with the poem, I was reminded of the story of Nala and Damayanti which has reference in Mahabharata. Raja Ravi Varma, In one of his his paintings, has also depicted Damayanti and the swan at her father's palace-pond. There the swan is shown perched on a pillar and is praising about king Nala, whom he had met a few days back, before Damayanti. The swan acted as a messenger between the two.

Cajoling a white swan in a tranquil pond, While a beautiful white lotus looks on With ardent curiosity, beautiful poetry dancing poetess that ye be ma'am

A marvelous poem... just beautiful

Fantastic poetry! Mam, it's just fabulous! !

Excellent work.....

'A poem of exquisite beauty and passionate love! ' - That's what this poem is. I agree with Bri Edwards: The word 'languishing' in the thid line may be replaced by 'lounging'. The poem and the picture complement each other, a beautiful combination.

While a beautiful white lotus looks on With ardent curiosity, Scintillating images into colourful phrases, Like shining pearl droplets of dancing rain, A poem of exquisite beauty and passionate.... enchanting expression. Beautiful poem with attractive graphic. Thanks for sharing.