Point Of Saturation Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

Point Of Saturation

Rating: 4.9

Speak up, O mightiest mountain
On the apex extraordinaire
What height you conjure
in your Dreams?

Speak up, O fathomless sea
From your dreaded depth
draped in dead silence
What abyss would
shiver you up
to scream?

Speak up, O scorching sun
born with a burning core
Flamed up in furore
What stream of heat
would suffice
your gleam?

Bob Blackwell 28 July 2009

Lots to ponder here Vaibhav, some believe life itself is eternal, therefore has no saturation. Reads well thank you. Bob 10+

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Subroto Chatterjee 29 July 2009

Speak up, O pilotbabu! Were you inspired to write this piece when scaling new heights? I think you just did. Cheers. Subroto

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Maitreyee Joshi 30 July 2009

well said and so much like a pilot.the point of saturation of the sea, the mountain and the sun are hard to measure.it is boundless and so has always been intruging to the poets.a thoughtful write.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 August 2009

Point of saturation be the amplitude of wisdom/greatness....nature is symbolic of this statement by her mercurial yet majestical aura...Me thinx i caught a smidgeoned lilt of Willie S., here, yes? A fine write, V.! FjR

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C. P. Sharma 01 August 2009

Excellent poetic outburst. I would add, Speak up, O Insatiable mind On the wings of imagination, What is your limit? CP

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Vidi Writes 07 November 2009

Point of saturation comes to those Who get exhaused with their limited explore Your talk to Mountain, Sea and the might Sun.... They never have any saturation point... Brim to their power and glory.... They forever stand to show and shine. I read your poem as an inspiration To be derived to look at these mighties And learn to hold the exploration level With much varities and unlimited. Love reading it... Great write indeed.

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Seema Aarella 19 August 2009

They are the matchless wonders of nature......as u say saturated to the brim! well concieved and scripted! ...10!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 August 2009

a well conceived concept.10 shan

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Dr Kamran Haider 17 August 2009

Vaibhav my friend, you have the ability to walk the paths beyond the reach of an ordinary soul's ability to tread... you have an extraordinary extended imagination... What a great piece you have shared with us... I am glad I read it... Thank you Regards, Kamran

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Ritty Patnaik 16 August 2009

there is a saturation point for everything, including the human mind.nature too! very well written poem which makes you wonder about the magnitude of natures saturation point.great write. ritty

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