Leaving all the worries
With no hurries
Arms on eachother's back
On a Bohemian track
And one as a whole
Deep in their soul
In a shapely mist
They start to twist
Like a rhythmical dove
With their endless love
And emotions so deep
The delights constantly creep
They share a joke
And laugh with a stoke
In a duple time
And background drum hymn
Hop-step-close-step they make
Like a bustling robust crake
Enchanting they look
Linked to a single hook
In ambiance full of braw
They look beautiful when they Polka!
(1/30/2009)
excellently composed rhythm and rhyme piece. quite descriptive i could visualise it. nice work.10
words dancing in rhythm...a poetic polka this...good work, Sameer...10
The joyful dance of life. Your rhymes add music to the form. May the happiness be continued, the worries only a shadow. Take care.10 for a poet doctor. Warm regards, Sandra
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I would like to translate this poem
you know Sameer, i actually saw the polka dancers. you have very vividly captured the rhythm and beat, bonohmie and camraderie- lovers having fun- lovely. you have great ability to sketch lively scenes...10 Mamta