Pot Belly....[ Inspired By A Message From Valsa George; Very Short; Humor/Humour; Obesity & Eating ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Pot Belly....[ Inspired By A Message From Valsa George; Very Short; Humor/Humour; Obesity & Eating ]

Rating: 5.0


If I had a "Pot Belly",
I'd boil my belly in a pot.
Then I'd eat with mint jelly;
I'd eat an awful, awful LOT! !

(July...27th...2018)

Friday, July 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous,silly
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Thanks, Valsa.And, to clarify, you were referring to me having a pot belly, NOT YOU! ! !

:) BRI

[OF COURSE YOU WERE KIDDING ME! ]
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eugene Levich 06 August 2018

For a poem like this you deserve a spanky! I like Valsa's reply.

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Valsa George 31 July 2018

An advice to Bri If you have a pot belly Consume less of jelly Cut your quota of candy And it will leave you lanky

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Tom Billsborough 29 July 2018

I assume Valsa saw you naked! Can you put a word in for me, Bri?

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2018

A boiled belly with a mint jelly... A one of a kind treat. This will be in the category of bizarre food.. Another silly and funny write. Great rhyme as always...10+++

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