Praying Mantis Goes To Church ……[ Insects; Fantasy; Church; Food; Short ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Praying Mantis Goes To Church ……[ Insects; Fantasy; Church; Food; Short ]



Imagine a church where just insects go to praise God. A Praying Mantis, a large predatory insect, makes her first (and probably last) visit to this 'insect church'. …….

Ms. Mantis takes a seat upon a high-backed bench.
Close to her are butterflies, beetles, flies, and BUGS.
A grasshopper eyes the mantis's menacing front legs.
The preacher says: 'Give your church-neighbors HUGS.'

The mantis's 'hug' becomes a death trap for a fly on its right.
The poor fly soon becomes the mantis's Sunday MEAL.
The 'Lucky Ones' flee, their wings or legs churning.
Ms. Mantis will need to find another church, I do FEEL.

(January …21st …2021)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
dear readers: it is dinner time and you will have to do without my 'Notes'
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 21 January 2021

Would there be cockroaches too or are they non-believers? Imaginative poem!

1 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 January 2021

Hey hey i have poems on the praying mantises but yours is real cool and funtastic humour just as we expect from the king of poetic humour and limericks. Kudos for this fun one.

1 0 Reply
Varsha M 21 January 2021

This is really beautiful to laugh and get out of bed....your poetry took me to world of imagery do beautiful. Im imagining this mantis and its prey... fantabulous humor.

0 0 Reply
Belle Wassermeister 05 December 2022

The praying mantis is really a PREYING mantis!

1 0 Reply
Bri Edwards 05 December 2022

Gee, readers, I hardly recall this poem at all. And....I certainly don't recall it being written so recently! ! ! ! Not one of my best, but it witll do in a pinch. : )

0 0 Reply
Captain Cur 31 March 2021

As long as mantis keeps filling the coffers, I'm sure she/he will be welcome. What is the loss of a few pesky parishioners!

0 0 Reply
Captain Cur 31 March 2021

Perhaps not!

0 0 Reply
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 January 2021

Ah you don't have a star button or i had rate it 5 shining stars.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards

Earth, i believe
Close
Error Success