Powers Of Love Poem by Aqua Flower

Powers Of Love

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The powers of love are stronger than the sea
Your riptides of love
I cannot break free
Let me drown in your ecstacy

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Saturday, September 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 20 February 2019

On rereading this poem I like how the lines '...stronger than the sea/…drown in you ecstasy' rhyme, very creative writing!

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Aqua Flower 21 February 2019

Hello and thank you for rereading. I like comparing passion with the sea. Mainly because it is so beautiful but can be so dangerous at the same time. Thank you for commenting again.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 15 September 2018

Power of love very well expressed in a few lines.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 September 2018

A lovely little piece of work. The first line stands as the epitome of this micro poem. Loved reading it...10

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Carl Roussell 15 September 2018

The undercurrents of love and passion well expressed in four lines.

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