abhimanyu kumar.s
venkatgiri kota
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Prize Poem

Rating: 3.3
I stood were I wasn't present
The where were I was present
Three sixty five attendance
Very tense in the dense.

I was to we
We and I to society
I am looking at myself
Walking away to find myself.

I lowered to a pitch
Thinking something to stitch
A pair He and She
Which the world may wish to see.

I write this poem in blue
With all my heart is true
I never expect a prize for this poem
As it remains my prize poem.
Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013
a lovely prize poem. nice write
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Constance K Yost 07 October 2012
I'm hoping that your lovely prize poem will win for you the prize.
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Thato Maluleka 23 August 2012
wow nicely written, very beautiful
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 July 2012
perfect and beautiful. also the title is obviously nice!
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Johnny Big Balls 30 June 2012
hate it when people go on about rhyming and why we shouldn't do it, some people like to rhyme others do not, it's not right to push your individual style on other aspiring poets. If it's good enough for dylan and emily d rhyming is good enough for me lol
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Marop Aron 29 June 2012
Woow, it that's very good..
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Renny Puspa Sari 28 June 2012
awesome poem. share more :)
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Comfort Ndlovu 27 June 2012
Know your style, stick to it, improve where necessary, enjoy and... keep on keeping on!
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Juan Guzman 22 June 2012
I have read three poems so far and all of wich i believe show that you need improvement in English grammer, if you were to improve i believe that you would be able to write much better. Also a word of advice. poetry does not have to have rhyming but it does when the words fit(They will give of a feeling to you, and you will know that no other word is better than the one you chose) , rhyming words in place of a better word kills the poem. As for the review of this poem. I do not feel as if you enjoyd writing this poem and as a result, i do not enjoy reading it much eithor. again i wait for your improvement. I believe that you have talent and that you can write much better poetry. Also i would enjoy it if you wrote a poem in a different style other than the 3 i have seen. Thank you.
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Cierrah Smiles 16 June 2012
Confussing at first but I liked it
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