abhimanyu kumar.s

Gold Star - 12,353 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Prize Poem - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I stood were I wasn't present
The where were I was present
Three sixty five attendance
Very tense in the dense.

I was to we
We and I to society
I am looking at myself
Walking away to find myself.

I lowered to a pitch
Thinking something to stitch
A pair He and She
Which the world may wish to see.

I write this poem in blue
With all my heart is true
I never expect a prize for this poem
As it remains my prize poem.


Comments about Prize Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Heather Wilkins (6/22/2013 11:22:00 AM)

    a lovely prize poem. nice write (Report)Reply

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  • (10/7/2012 1:21:00 PM)

    I'm hoping that your lovely prize poem will win for you the prize. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/23/2012 12:31:00 AM)

    wow nicely written, very beautiful (Report)Reply

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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/31/2012 5:27:00 AM)

    perfect and beautiful. also the title is obviously nice! (Report)Reply

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  • (6/30/2012 4:50:00 AM)

    hate it when people go on about rhyming and why we shouldn't do it, some people like to rhyme others do not, it's not right to push your individual style on other aspiring poets. If it's good enough for dylan and emily d rhyming is good enough for me lol (Report)Reply

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  • Marop Aron (6/29/2012 7:23:00 AM)

    Woow, it that's very good.. (Report)Reply

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  • Renny Puspa Sari (6/28/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    awesome poem. share more :) (Report)Reply

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  • (6/27/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    Know your style, stick to it, improve where necessary, enjoy and... keep on keeping on! (Report)Reply

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  • Juan Guzman (6/22/2012 10:37:00 AM)

    I have read three poems so far and all of wich i believe show that you need improvement in English grammer, if you were to improve i believe that you would be able to write much better. Also a word of advice. poetry does not have to have rhyming but it does when the words fit(They will give of a feeling to you, and you will know that no other word is better than the one you chose) , rhyming words in place of a better word kills the poem. As for the review of this poem. I do not feel as if you enjoyd writing this poem and as a result, i do not enjoy reading it much eithor. again i wait for your improvement. I believe that you have talent and that you can write much better poetry. Also i would enjoy it if you wrote a poem in a different style other than the 3 i have seen. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • Cierrah Smiles (6/16/2012 11:19:00 PM)

    Confussing at first but I liked it (Report)Reply

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  • (6/15/2012 1:11:00 PM)

    nice thought provoking piece...winning in having the talent to express oneself... well done.. tyvm and thanks for reviewing my beautiful kenya...karen (Report)Reply

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  • (6/14/2012 4:22:00 PM)

    Nice work, keep it us. The sky is for you (Report)Reply

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  • Zoya Khalid (6/14/2012 1:25:00 AM)

    I don't quite understand this poem...... my humble suggestion is that you should also write what you mean by this poem.... for better understanding of the readers. (Report)Reply

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  • Sallam Yassin (6/12/2012 1:04:00 PM)

    as i am just a man of feeling say it great my freind (Report)Reply

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  • (6/5/2012 10:18:00 AM)

    Nice poem. congratulation. (Report)Reply

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  • Vincent Kuo (6/2/2012 4:40:00 PM)

    My honest opinion, I'm a bit confused what you're trying to express here. Although I like the message embodied in the end - that it doesn't matter what prizes or awards one may receive for poetry, a poem remains your most intimate and reflects your inner sensations, which is ultimately what matters most. (Report)Reply

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  • Sheena Datta (5/27/2012 12:25:00 AM)

    good one...short n sweet. (Report)Reply

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  • Johnathan Juarez (5/17/2012 9:42:00 AM)

    interesting nice one man (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    I was to we
    We and I to society
    I am looking at myself
    Walking away to find myself.
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  • (3/29/2012 10:24:00 AM)

    I was to we
    We and I to society
    I am looking at myself
    Walking away to find myself.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 22, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 22, 2012


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