Pronunciation 1 Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Pronunciation 1

Rating: 5.0


Va conduc la aeroport
Ne vedem vineri
Nu este nimic rau in asta
Depinde de imprejurari

Amid the men of Okinawa I saw you
Your soft voice soaring across the Universe
With innocent children touching grace
To a violin's loud soothing melody

Vintul bate dinspre nord-vest
In cit timp ajung acolo?
As vrea sa vad ce tablouri au
Este din canza parazitilor atmosferici

(dedicated to a poet friend at poemhunter, Marieta Maglas)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 06 October 2009

no it's not french or italian.....anyway, i liked this poem dispite i didn't understand the other language, , , , it must be marieta's languge.....romanian? ?

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Noel Horlanda 06 October 2009

To tell you frankly I do not know and understand the lingo. Could this be French or Italian? No matter what this piece is quite exceptional. Only you could composed such strange concept.

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Louis Rams 05 October 2009

a beautiful write, and if that was the translation then it was even greater. a ten

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Matt Mooney 05 October 2009

Well done.Lovely imagery to the sweet music of the violin.10.

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Marieta Maglas 05 October 2009

I can tell you... I feel happy because you like so much my poetry... Excellent poem..........10++++++++++

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 19 October 2009

a good tribute to Marieta! I don't understand Romanian but I liked the English verses! a nice Imagery. innocent children/ soothing melody.... very nice

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Juan Carlos Abeti 06 October 2009

it seems a very nice one, but i do not understand the other lenguage

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Ravi A 06 October 2009

The symbolism is beyond my scope. Overall a nice one. Marieta is a good hearted lady.

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The Lost.. 06 October 2009

nice poem......................

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Luwi Habte 06 October 2009

nice tribute to a great poet luwi

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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