Purblind Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

A magical creation full of music and darkness..still, here darkness is promising a pure bright light..10++++ Best wishes. A.

This is such a powerful poem that even the reprimand in it commands acceptability. The best thing is that it spares none.

The eyes of the true poet can set the world alight for his readers. Thank you for sharing what you have seen through the windows of your soul. Shine on, Naseer. Warm regards, Sandra

a deep insight that comes like a flash of lightening at unexpected moments in life, when one is calm, filled with love and compassion. amazing images, disturbing, uplifting leaving me in tumult, compelling to introspect.how rare are such moments... we are too preoccupied to take note of life around us in all its shades and, light or no light- are blind. Mamta

a blind date....with a special moment to remember....a giving of oneself, just to let other live....I cried and say goodbye of what was there which is not fair, yet! Wonder of the day to come of what is beautiful in the memories of the past.....how i wish to settle in one way as it could be....now your poem satisfy my thirst of what is today.....God bless....a 10+++++++

To see the true beauty around one needs an inner eye which resides in one's heart....very well penned sir..a beautiful poem filled with lovely images...10

Thinking of heart and mind in bright light of vision explores the depths of universe relating to our prospects our stray dreams find their reality

i agree. i love this one. GREAT JOB! i give it a 10: D

A plea of the vision-impaired through words... 'to see Wrapped up in the primordial fog Waiting since life's beginning Some one's eyes! '...very touching and carefully written....excellent

Wonderful imagery and i can hear the music. Expertly depicted. Thank you for sharing your talent :)