Quack Haiku - 5 Poem by Sathya Narayana

Quack Haiku - 5

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QUACK HAIKU-5

Rats
Chasing cats
Revolution

Ants
Slaying a serpant
Revolution

Greens
Staying as green
Revolution

Axe, sickle
Plough, saw reigning
Revolution

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 November 2008

very ingenous write, sir. nothing can describe revolution so well. thanks.

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premji premji 24 November 2008

writing like you, ah! revolution! 10++

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Bob Blackwell 21 November 2008

Clever words well done

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 November 2008

What an impulsive Haiku Matchaa! ! ! penetrating all my senses to a halt! ! !

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 20 November 2008

God religiously adoring his devotees- revolution. Good work

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009

Love these excellent pieces.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 30 November 2008

I enjoyed these very mush, a good and delightful read. Loyd

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Tarun Sharma 30 November 2008

again amazed at simplicity of weighed thought, but is this the only dimension of revolution? i don't know! rgds

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Ency Bearis 29 November 2008

strong words...clever write... Ency Bearis

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Anjali Sinha 29 November 2008

Satya conquering PH revolution superb! ! ! ! ! ! +10 regards anju

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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