Romeo Della Valle

Rookie - 337 Points (Ageless / Dominican Republic)

Questions Waiting For Answers - Poem by Romeo Della Valle

In what garden of error
Is there greater despair
Than the substitute
For love's pure bloom? ...

Which is the open wound
In an immovable ground
That makes of love's a weed
To depart while it bleeds? ...

The lie is disclosed,
The diamond-only glass
Which falls from truth-then cracks...

False love-fly from me!
Or I will run away from thee,
While the surface blistered still,
My broken dream-I cannot heal! ...

Silent lie- perish and be gone,
Much of life is yet condone,
When from past shall present borrow,
This burden shall weigh less of sorrow...

Comments about Questions Waiting For Answers by Romeo Della Valle

  • Hans Vr (12/15/2011 6:56:00 PM)

    The pain of a broken heart, so very well expressed in this beautiful poem. I think the word love has too many meanings in the English language. Romantic love tends to be a bit possissive and is rather fragile. The unconditional love we give to our famly members is of quite a different nature. If we can manage to put a bit of the second into the first, it may be a good thing. Sorry, for trying to answer an unanswerable question. The poem is great. (Report) Reply

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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/9/2011 12:22:00 PM)

    Life is full of questions when we feel blue//
    Really a g'd poem! ! ! 10+++++
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  • Sajna Kailas (12/8/2011 1:46:00 AM)

    our life itself a question mark, then what to say about love as it is the base of life! ! ! ! !
    your work is always gives us some mental exercise.loved it! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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  • Cosmic Dreamer (12/3/2011 6:46:00 PM)

    Love is never the lie... The lie is man's ignorance of the truth... As always, beautifully written... Peace and love always... (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2011 10:21:00 PM)

    Beautifully written...
    some questions you may want answers to but then again you might not be able to handle the truth.
    especailly if its related to love...
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 2, 2011

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