Rain - 2 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rain - 2

Rating: 4.8

Beads of water freed
From the clutches of the clouds
A mystery song.

Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan - Austin, All Rights Reserved

Sylvia Frances Chan 31 May 2019

Heavy rain showers created, more exception than the rule. Here is mystery involved, and I have the wish to be able to may hear this mystery song, IF I may.................................

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 May 2019

A magnificent poem about Rain again but this is different., indeed a different Song, a mystery song and that can be in all kinds of tunes and melodies. IF it is raining, just listen to the melody. Each time another melody indeed a mystery song. Like a painting framed loveliest by the great poetess. A 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 31 May 2019

Wow! .. Ever such beauty and feeling captured in theses lines! .. Beautifully sung, beautifully moving! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! ..10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! .................+++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 June 2019

Countless songs about rain have been enjoyed by millions of music lovers.... I am one of them. Reminds me of the song I LIKE CHOPIN popularized by GAZEBO.... I love this haiku, dear ate Rose....10++++++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 June 2019

Rereading this cutest brevity, a most beautiful haiku. The 5-7-5 format. Each rain has its own Song, since we never know how hard or few the rainfalls are, thus a Mystery Song. Most beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 12 November 2019

A great haiku that forces us to analyze your words. Great job.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 September 2019

Rain... both the poems present novel imagery... loved them..

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Tom Allport 29 August 2019

Even though water moves in mysterious ways it always finds it's own level?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 July 2019

A lovely little poem on mystery of nature! An admirable contemplation................................10

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Indira Renganathan 06 June 2019

All functions in nature are mysterious only...not exceptional the rain too...lovely

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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