Rain - 1 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

Brilliant brevity and such a powerful metaphor. Indeed tropical rains can be so strong and can penetrate the dry ground like bullets a great gift to plants, This must be about the tropical rains. A very impressive poem about Rain. Thank you so much for sharing.10+++++++++++

Ever so moving to nature and life! .. Beautifully and powerfully painted! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing! ..10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ................+++++

Simply heavenly haiku, dear Ate Rose........10++++++++++++

But they are rubber bullets perhaps, warning green plants to stand firm rain, storm, or hot sun... Good write

What a loveliest haiku the 5-7-5 format. How very interesting is this haiku. A most deserving haiku from the great poetess. Thank you so much for sharing this most important haiku about the seasonal rain. The plants and all other greens are truly thankful. A captivating haiku. Love reading this haiku time and again.

A great gift to plants means to all.very intelligent writing Mam.

gift to plants......fine. Thank u. anjandev roy.

Wow! A wonderful poem...short but highly expressive! The fabulous use of simile 'penetrate like bullets' is the epitome of this amazing work...............10

ADDITION: since you have read it like a jetplane in the sky. So OVER. Read this precious poem slowly and let the words penetrate your mind. I like very much this brevity from the Great Poetess. Thank you so much for sharing. God's Blessings in Abundance for thee and thy beloved family. Amen...............Sent with love and care, Sylvia FC

My first impression having read the poem, WOW! A Powerful Poem. Truly, with the word BULLETS and penetrate, this poem's power increases........reading poems we can do that in several ways, but ONE THING we must giove to poems when reading GIVE IT TIME. No time? Don't read, but never hustle, the quality will decrease.